Hey blog readers,
I could really use your help! So, I'm sifting through hours and hours of material here, and this is what I've condensed down to so far. I think I might need to add a little bit of narrative to make the whole thing more cohesive. I also think that I may need to edit and shorten— Is this really boring anywhere? What should I change.
Needing a positive push— S
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I think that you have some great material here but maybe some narrative would be helpful because it gets a little hard to follow at times. I am also working with using interviews alongside my own narration and it can get really frustrating to figure out the right way in which to frame a piece. I think that giving it some context though would really help the reader follow the story easier.
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